How is this idea on how to ask a girl to a dance?

I'm asking this girl to a dance. We both run cross country and were friends but not great friends.. heres what i was gonna do...



I have a question for you, and its not related to running

I was wondering if youd like to be my date for homcoming

I would love to take you and be your escort

and if you say yes, ill promise not to wear short shorts



i would put this with some chocolate and place it in her locker..good idea?How is this idea on how to ask a girl to a dance?
Aw, I love it! I'm guessing you're a pretty funny guy, in which case this is perfect! She'll laugh, and she'll love it! :D I would